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期中考试 书面表达高分作品选登

作者：卢海燕    来源：本站原创    发布时间：2005年05月16日 点击数：

本次考试第一次启用全国高考湖南省英语试题新题型,对于同学们来说是一个挑战,而且本次考试阅读量很大,在比较紧凑的时间里要写出一篇比较好的文章,确实不容易,非平时训练有素不能得到高分. 这次考试,在本人所教K0305和K0306班的学生有很多同学写作拿到了14分的最高分数(满分为15分),在此,选登两篇供大家参考学习.
附书面表达题目:(满分15分)
下图(略)是我们中学每天各项活动情况.请你根据此图用英语写一封短信给你的美国朋友Smith,介绍我们学校每天的生活.
注意: 1. 书信包括图中所有的内容,可适当增加情节;
2. 字数在100--120之间;
3. 信的开头和结尾已经给出,字数已经计算在内.
第一篇: 作者:K0305黄金玲, 本次考试以108分好成绩位居年级英语第一名
Dear Mr. Smith,
Our school day activities are colourful. Now let me introduce them to you.
Of course, as a student, our main task is to study. So we spend about 8 hours on study. And we also take about an hour to do some sports. Rest is important. We have seven-hour sleeping time per day. And we have an hour for meals and entertainment. Generally speaking, we also have some time to do some other things we'd like to do besides those. In a word, our school daily life is full and meaningful.
What's your schoolday like? Could you tell me something about it? Expect your letter.

Yours truly,
Gao Ming

第二篇：作者K0306班周瑛瑛，本次考试以102分好成绩获班级第一名，年级第二名。
Dear Mr. Smith,
How is eveything going?
I'm very glad to show you my life in our school. Every day, I study for 8 hours. It takes us quite a long time, but I don't feel tired after a day's working. I always have something interesting to make myself happy, for example, sports. I spend less than an hour in doing sports. Meals and entertainment are also important to me. They bothe cost me an hour a day. When everything is finished, it's time to go to bed. There are 7 hours for sleeping at night. It's said that we can benefit from our good sleeping. It's better for us young students to have a litte longer time to sleep, maybe 7 hours isn't enough for us. Do you think so?
I am looking forward to your letter to know about your school life.
Yours truly,
Gao Ming
说明：这两位同学能在这次考试题量比较大，时间很紧张的情况下将写作完成得比较好，这与她们平时注重练习是分不开的，在平时写作训练中，她们的作文总是优秀等级。所以在这里提醒同学们一定要记住：考试不是靠短时间的突击就能取得好成绩的，要靠平时的积累和训练有素。